Saturday, September 8, 2012

सच्चाई

हे प्रिये! 
तू 
समझती है,
मैं, तुझे 
भूल गया हूँ!
पर,
चाहे, हूँ 
मैं मंदिर में
या फिर,कोई 
मस्जिद में, 
अधरों पे,
तेरा ही, 
नाम मेरे, अब 
रहता है!
सोता हूँ
तेरा 
नाम लेकर,  
जगने पर 
तू 
याद आती है!
तू 
सपना है,
सच्चाई है,
तुझसे 
जीवन का 
राग मेरे!
मैं तो 
अभी भी 
तेरा हूँ 
पर, तू
हो गयी 
परायी है! 

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Dedicated to "You" :)

23 comments:

amit ganguly said...

Beautiful and truthful thoughts expressed here.

gurufrequent said...

thanks Amit :)

AmitAag said...

...nice!
wish "you" reads too and appreciates:)

gurufrequent said...

thanks for your wishes Amit ji :)

Ghazala Hossain said...

Romantic..!

gurufrequent said...

@Ghazala...thanks :)

suman said...

Lovely....beautifully written..words are nicely arranged...i must say "wow"..

gurufrequent said...

@suman..thanks a lot :)

moni_in_ wonderland said...

Kya baat hai!! This could be the lyrics of a song...Very nicely written Guruji!

moni_in_ wonderland said...

Kya baat hai!! This could be the lyrics of a song...Very nicely written Guruji!

hridyanubhuti said...

WOW..WOW....WOW....
very beautiful
"अधरों पे, तेरा ही, नाम मेरे, अब रहता है!"
how romantic... love to read ...

gurufrequent said...

@moni..thanks a lot cutie :)
@indu...good to know that you liked it....thanks for your compliment :)

Anonymous said...

touche'

domesticgoddess-nextdoor said...

touche'

gurufrequent said...

@renu .. :) :)

Atul Tripathi said...

congratulations. well written

gurufrequent said...

@Atul....thanks a ton :)..but why congratulations ?

Divya A L said...

hmmmmmm..... you really are a nut case!!! And the most beautiful poems are written by them!! This is one such! Kudos!!

gurufrequent said...

@divya...thanks :) I am happy that you liked it :)

Saru Singhal said...

Losing someone you love and still the love is present like always. Lovely poem.

gurufrequent said...

@saru...thanks :) i am glad tht u liked it :)

Prabodh Kr. Pandey said...

viyog ras adn atishayokti alankaar!! :D :P
awesome combination...n so is ur poem \m/ :)

gurufrequent said...

@PKP....thanks a lot :)